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Ahkihoun

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The only animation I've given 5 stars to. Absolutely beautiful. Great work.

I know you mentioned that you put a lot of time into this, but look at it from the perspective of the community.

1. There's no real sound, and the sound you do have is loud and obnoxious.
2. The entire animation is made up of no animation. There's a badly drawn background, some images that slide across your stage, and sonic's walk cycle.
3. Was there a story to this? I don't feel like it was really told if there was one.

Two hours is HARDLY any amount of time on an animation, and stating that you spent that much time on it, has made it obvious why this flash is in the situation its in. Try spending a couple weeks on something first, then come back. I'm sure you'll notice that your quality will have improved.

VicManEs responds:

Ok, Thanks.
(I did this in my free time)

OMG yes!! This is great! I love how you did the backgrounds! And how you were able to make things feel like one cohesive piece! So awesome!

ShawnBranden responds:

Thank you! I wish I could take credit for all of the backgrounds but I had some very talented friends helping me out.

Wish I had read the comment below before spending the time watching the preloader.

You defintley have something creepy going on with the designs and characters and world. I can't say I was actually interested in the flash though; but I've never been interested in flash submissions having to do with poop either. The audio is also really obnoxious at times. Good for you for finishing though. I'm sure there's a plethora of fans on here who love chocolate cake too.

Its too bad, because when I saw the preview picture it was in color. While its just a test, I feel like some attention to detail would ahve made this a bit more interesting. Ok for now, but I hope you consider putting some real time into your future submissions!

When I saw this, I was thinking, wow! Very MasterArdvarkish..then I checked out your profile. and I was all like. OOOOO. Thats why. haha. Good to see something new from ya.

Thanks for sharing your passion with us. This animation is really great. The story is really touching, though I was kinda sad to not see it "finished" in the traditional sense. :P

Still loving it, though this one felt sloppier in animation quality. But maybe I'm being a big poo. Funny though. Good to see Dovahbear back in action and off the honey mead.

I love what a stream of consciousness this movie is. It was very creative and I love how dynamic your scenes were. There wasnt any really one part that I felt was flat. Seeing this however, I would like to see something more fleshed out; I havnt checked out your gallery yet, so I'm about to do that. I think your animation could really be seamless though if you dedicated more time to it. Still though, overall a really great animation.

Just trying to be better than I was in 2012.

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